Thread:HerobrineAC0318/@comment-30266474-20170610041803

Hi Herobrine! I went through the draft you provided and did some basic grammar fixes, and I addressed a few logical matters. I wrote each edit in the form of a suggestion that you can either accept or decline. P rior to doing so, y ou will be able to see each change that is being made. I do have a few more suggestions for how you can improve your writing of this story, but I'll let you work through these edits first.

As for the message you sent me, I had to delete it, because it provided an open link that would make your document publicly accessible and susceptible to vandalism. I saved the document to my Drive, so I'll still have access to it.  