Thread:HerobrineAC0318/@comment-30266474-20170610041803/@comment-30266474-20170610143119

What Darth said is the advice I was planning to give you. You want your readers to be gripped by the first line. One thing I recommend is this: instead of just describing what your character is doing, develop your character and make him relatable to the reader. Remember, you don't need to write just about typical Minecraft gameplay, since people are too familiar with it. The purple book was a good start, but your story should have an exciting element right away.

As for a hook, you can begin your first line with, "I was down to 1/2 a heart fighting this Skeleton!" Then, describe the fight, and you can later backtrack your narration to your first day after you've gained your reader's attention. There are many ways to do this, and the above is just my example.