Thread:TheKimbler1/@comment-30979292-20170609204312/@comment-30266474-20170610040952

Hi Herobrine! I went through the draft and did some basic grammar fixes, and I addressed a couple logical matters. I wrote each edit in the form of a suggestion that you can either accept or decline. P rior to doing so, y ou will be able to see each change that is being made. I do have a few more suggestions for how you can improve your writing of this story, but I'll let you work through these edits first.

I would suggest deleting this message since it provides an open link, which can let other users have editing access to your document. I saved the document to my Drive, so I'll still have access to it.