Thread:Rith4life/@comment-25014034-20170331054611/@comment-28905095-20170408073528

I'm not sure on the formal language for the tutorials...

Two examples:

"For the first day your focus should be on getting food, wood, shelter and if you make it some stone for making tools. This will help you to survive the first night."

Or.

"For the first day the Players' focus should b e on getting food, wood, shelther and if he/she (or they) make it some stone for making tools. This will help in surviving the first night."

I think the first reads a lot better (for a tutorial), as a tutorial is one-on-one with the reader in a much stronger sense than the other pages. Making it formal (which kind of dictates passive from as well) will make it a whole lot harder to write.

It would be a lot of "he/she" or "they" (if one chooses that form) or rewriting into passive sentences. I feel a Tutorial should be active and straight at the reader; aka "you", "your" and so on.