Thread:HerobrineAC0318/@comment-30266474-20170610041803/@comment-30979292-20170610142033

Darthwikia25 wrote: The first thing I'd like to point out is that your story does not have a "hook". Your story is what every Minecrafter does, in every default world, and sounds like more of a "guide" if you know what I mean.

But, you're not limited to what you can see and do in Minecraft. You can completely re-imagine how you write it. Minecraft is just your canvas - but you can base great stories inside it!

Ok, I'll add a hook soon. It's kinda like a half story, half guide.